This took me a long long time...But I am satisfied with the results. I'll let this one marinade before I think of any changes. I'm open for suggestions.
in class you said you did see it as a good representation of divorce. I will check my spelling, though.
Divorce can be a painful process, unpredictable, and messy. That is why I chose the ink splatter-controlling the ink was unpredictable. The many "legs" of the ink that go off in their own directions are representational of the emotional process of divorce.
THANKS FOR INVITING ME TO SEE YOUR BLOG, JON! i like whats going on here. check your hyphens and make sure they shouldn't be en dashes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jonathan P. Serrano-
Born and raised in the Lower East Side of Manhattan.
I enjoy the diversity of the city, but could do without the steep rent. Feel free to email me.
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5 comments:
this looks good, but not sure what it has to do with divorce.
ink splatter?
maybe.
okay.
i'll go for it.
but, thin.
check your spelling, please.
love.
g.
in class you said you did see it as a good representation of divorce. I will check my spelling, though.
Divorce can be a painful process, unpredictable, and messy. That is why I chose the ink splatter-controlling the ink was unpredictable. The many "legs" of the ink that go off in their own directions are representational of the emotional process of divorce.
I'll post the revised spelling version soon
THANKS FOR INVITING ME TO SEE YOUR BLOG, JON!
i like whats going on here.
check your hyphens and make sure they shouldn't be en dashes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lovez ya
yes.
conflicted about the imagery along with the topic.
but leave it for now.
maybe you'll figure a way to tie it together.
go onto the next project.
g.
still unsure of the combination of image and typography in this piece.
perhaps the typography is too clean.
did you try mrs eaves?
g.
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